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wind_dancer(风舞者)

Sorry I can't type in chinese in my office :)

Regarding #1. Good catch! some other people mentioned this also. En, I need to study it.

Regarding #2. Yes, I noticed the armpit but I don't know how to make it look better in photoshop (my photoshop skill is very limited), I would appreciate if you can teach me this. The shoulder belt?...... well , the model takes care of it. Can you tell me why it's not good to have a see-through one? The background is just a straight wall. She sits one a white sofa. So the background may not look that seamless.

Thank you very much for your comments.

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枫下拾英 / 摄影艺术 / 人像摄影再试, 请高手砸砖 -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-10 {184} (#4493867@0)
http://www.bayareadragon.com/forum/viewthread.php?tid=17239&extra=page%3D1

感觉和一小DC拍出来得也没啥太大区别 -igoogle(心系灾区); 2008-6-10 {26} (#4494556@0)
模特儿不错。

我不是高手

Mind telling me what point-and-shoot DC you use to get this kind of portraits? Thanks -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-11 (#4495979@0)
区别挺大, 起码我的小DC是不行的。 -tdr(行色匆匆); 2008-6-17 (#4507013@0)

不懂灯光。。。我从化妆造型的角度说说，可以吗？没有办法，看见人像摄影就忍不住冲进来，赫赫。 -after(jennifer); 2008-6-10 {471} (#4495241@0)
模特不错，风格自然，镜头前比较有表现力。
摄影师的catch到了模特最自然的瞬间---这个是比较难，特别是如果模特不是专业的话，那摄影师的能力就受到考验了，you did a good job on this one！

something to improve---
第一张，手腕处有些模糊，和整体风格不协调。通常这种近距离的人像好像很少有虚化某一部分的。
第二张，请无论如何把腋下ps好。还有，透明的肩带最最不可取，完全可以藏起来。还有，后面的背景布有个接缝？？

如果是第一次studio shoot, not a bad job. keep the good work! :)

This is what I want! Thank you for your comments and suggestions. -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-11 {600} (#4495977@0)
Sorry I can't type in chinese in my office :)

Regarding #1. Good catch! some other people mentioned this also. En, I need to study it.

Regarding #2. Yes, I noticed the armpit but I don't know how to make it look better in photoshop (my photoshop skill is very limited), I would appreciate if you can teach me this. The shoulder belt?...... well , the model takes care of it. Can you tell me why it's not good to have a see-through one? The background is just a straight wall. She sits one a white sofa. So the background may not look that seamless.

Thank you very much for your comments.

打字太辛苦。。。 -after(jennifer); 2008-6-11 {1280} (#4496712@0)
本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛-Regarding photoshop...作为摄影师，用软件修片,it's a M-U-S-T。所有我合作过的摄影师在这方面都很强。就连我，虽然“痛恨“电脑，但是因为工作关系，有时候要自己修片，所以都得赶鸭子上架学习啊。修腋下的这点工作是最基本的拉。。。所以在这方面还要加油！:)

--“The shoulder belt?...... well , the model takes care of it. “ WRONG。摄影师要总控。拍出来片子是你的版权，作品不好，就是你的问题。片子拿出来示人时，就不应该有什么借口了，因为摄影师的署名是你，总不能在照片下面贴个大标签--‘肩带没有处理好，是模特的责任’；‘眼影颜色选择失误，是化妆师的责任’；‘灯光不好是助理的责任’。片子不好，就是摄影师责任，所以，这就是为什么一个PHOTO SHOOT的 TEAM，每一个MEMBER 都要很强的原因。摄影师，模特，化装造型，一个方面弱了，都不行。而总控是摄影师，所以还是那句话，没有借口。至于透明肩带为什么不好。。很简单，用透明肩带，当然就是希望它INVISIBLE阿，但是现在都明明白白地显示在片子上了，就失去了它的效用了，失效的东西，还要它干吗呢？？其实这张片子，头发拨到一侧，如果是很光洁肩部，加上项链的点缀，是不错的造型。多看看人像摄影的片子，多看时尚杂志，会有帮助。

-- BACKGROUND。。。现在你也许没有把人像摄影作为主攻，不在BACKGROUND DROP上花钱是可以理解的。但可以用别的，比如说大的布单来代替，然后通过后期修片做效果。

第一次人像摄影你拍成这样，已经相当有才了！我这些就是鸡蛋里挑骨头了。加油吧。更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net

En, you are right -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-11 {392} (#4496815@0)
You are absolutely right: It's the photographer's responsibility to coordinate everything because the name on the photo is the photographer's. Good point! Thanks for reminding.

Sometimes, you know, it's embarrassed to mention the dressing issue or model body flaw.........

I have been learning myself on Photoshop, but not always that good. :-) En, need to learn harder.

Thanks.

室内的高光部位有些细节失真,桥上那一张不错. -happylw(万水千山); 2008-6-11 (#4496730@0)

Yeah, some parts are over-exposed, especially the white skirt. I found it's hard to balance the face and the white part. Any good idea? -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-11 (#4496822@0)

Don't leave too much headroom (P72, Digital Photography Book, vol 2). -xmlhttprequest(build5381); 2008-6-11 (#4496912@0)

Ah? I don't have that book. Can you copy that part here? Thanks! -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-12 (#4497622@0)

Just don't leave too much space above subject's head... -xmlhttprequest(build5381); 2008-6-12 (#4498711@0)

背景虚化很ugly，器材，器材啊:D 老兄最近开始玩人像啦，不错不错，镜头要升级，别的慢慢来:) -mfcguy(); 2008-6-13 (#4499259@0)

Thanks, dude, for your 2 cents. Can you please be more specific about the background? -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-13 (#4499611@0)

背景虚化的二线性很明显，都是小圈圈。。。 -mfcguy(); 2008-6-13 (#4500876@0)

哎呀我的妈呀，您这理论一套一套的，我是晕了！可不可以深入浅出大白话跟俺说说？（这几天“金婚”看的我都这味了，呵呵） -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-14 (#4501616@0)

-> -mfcguy(); 2008-6-14 (#4501670@0)

Thanks a lot! -wind_dancer(风舞者); 2008-6-16 (#4504485@0)

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