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一张人像，全自然光，没化装。能给点建议吗？

tw9900(路太滑)
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Last Updated: 2011-8-18
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  • 枫下拾英 / 摄影艺术 / 北京西单的流浪艺人和美眉 -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-15 {200} (#6855850@0)


    • 第一张的内容应该可以表现得更丰富一些。 -sinhaul(曾经挨踢); 2011-8-16 (#6857564@0)
      • 发掘提材不易，发挥更难。请赐教。先谢了。 -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-16 (#6858104@0)
        • 赐教不敢。我觉得如果能增加背景的内容，比如行人和街景作参照物，使流浪艺人的生存状态通过对比而表现得更明了。或用广角，或变换角度来实现。这是我的想法，知易行难。我也未曾做好，只是交流一下看法。 -sinhaul(曾经挨踢); 2011-8-17 (#6860176@0)
          • 当时只想着光与影，艺人的脸和手，脚。的确应当多些角度和深度。 -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6860578@0)
            • 个人觉得那位老者的表情帮助不了主题，阴影是合理的。个人觉得构图抓住眼球是基础，感染或者震撼内心是高级层次。 -donaldinthornhill(问世间，何为英雄); 2011-8-18 (#6860790@0)
              • Did you notice his right arm and deep brown skin, his iron face, his slipes, his strong-look back, his dirty grey hair....? Those brand the hardish of his life . -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6862022@0)
                • 如果能有衣着光鲜，皮肤白晰的路人或者这类人物的广告画作背景映衬，流浪艺人的蓬头垢面和黝黑的皮肤就能突显出来。 -sinhaul(曾经挨踢); 2011-8-18 (#6862689@0)
          • 一张人像，全自然光，没化装。能给点建议吗？ -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 {211} (#6860611@0)
            NIKON D5000 F/1.8 1/125 ISO-800 50MM FIXEDNIKON D5000 F7.1 1/200 ISO-500 50MM FIXED
            • 模特自己喜欢吗？ -remember123(remember123); 2011-8-18 (#6860690@0)
              • I need your view as a photogragher regarding to this portrait. This my first few shots after getting my new camera and 50mm lens. You are welcome to criticise. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6860695@0)
                • 我觉得如果模特是你的朋友，或者和你很熟，那她喜欢不喜欢是最重要的。摄影论坛里的评论，一般都太侧重技术细节，不太适合熟人的照片。 -remember123(remember123); 2011-8-18 (#6860775@0)
                  • You are absolutly right, but we want express something with sharp tools and skill. Do you agree? -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6860868@0)
            • 你能说一下你想表现什么吗？ -donaldinthornhill(问世间，何为英雄); 2011-8-18 (#6860794@0)
              • The natural beauty. A lot of portaits you don't recognize who they are even they are your close friends. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6860852@0)
                • 如果是我构图，我会突出她的眼睛嘴角，她的眼神宁静嘴角略带俏皮，有感染力。其它细节虽然能展现你器材敏锐的捕捉力，但对这个主题没什么帮助，有时可能反而会削弱对主体的感受，我会选择其他角度。纯粹探讨。lol -donaldinthornhill(问世间，何为英雄); 2011-8-18 (#6860928@0)
                  • This is what I would like to know about. You have very sharp eyes, but how to achive the goal? Pls give me a few hints. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6860975@0)
                    • 我也是初级爱好者，不知道该怎么说，个人感受是用心感受人物或者景物，提炼你心里的主题或画面的灵魂，构造美的布局，捕捉最合适的角度或者瞬时，准确的传递给你的观众。 -donaldinthornhill(问世间，何为英雄); 2011-8-18 (#6861102@0)
                      • Thanks a lot. Got some good shots to share with us? -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6861395@0)
            • more fill light would be good. either flash fill light or in post processing. -genjurok(Genjuro); 2011-8-18 (#6861620@0)
              • Good suggestion. I need more lights from her left to make her face standing out. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6861828@0)
              • I think outdoor shooting is much more challenge than indoor shooting. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6861877@0)
            • 我的看法：A：要有眼神光，B：整成黑白的。 -sinhaul(曾经挨踢); 2011-8-18 (#6862709@0)
              • 整成黑白的好办，但怎么才能要有眼神光，是我的技术问题还是模特儿的眼神？ -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6863019@0)
                • 应该算是技术问题，模特前侧面如果有点光源的话眼珠就会有反光，也就是我说的眼神光。 -sinhaul(曾经挨踢); 2011-8-19 (#6864868@0)
                  • 请教用什么样的光源才能做到？ -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-19 (#6865270@0)
            • 技术有待提高。神情捕捉不错。神情很平静。给个对比。 -aloha2u(工夫茶); 2011-8-18 {303} (#6862948@0)


              • your pics don't show up. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6862995@0)
    • 这也叫“艺人”，这也算“美眉”？。。。 -hwy400(朱元璋); 2011-8-18 (#6861781@0)
      • I forgive your attitude, so show us some meimei in your secret drawer. -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6861839@0)
        • :-) -flying00(free); 2011-8-18 (#6862106@0)
        • To forgive is always a good atitude. But my question mark is your fundamental barrier to... shoot well. Sorry for rmy rudeness. -hwy400(朱元璋); 2011-8-18 (#6862172@0)
          • White radish or red radish, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Are you so ... about it? I'm shooting beatiful things to share with people who enjoy it. Btw I am not a. pro and make a living with it. I think you are not a rude. person, are you? -tw9900(路太滑); 2011-8-18 (#6862406@0)

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